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Synthetic source intent: tell a US client that integration will be two weeks late, explain the cause without blaming them, and propose a recovery plan.
Formal version
Subject: Revised timeline for the data integration
Hi Alex,
I’m writing to share an update on the data integration. During validation, we found that two historical fields use different definitions across the source systems. Rather than migrate inconsistent records, we recommend resolving the mapping first.
This moves the target completion date from August 14 to August 28. By August 7, we will send the proposed field definitions for your review. We will then run a sample migration and share the reconciliation results before the full cutover.
Could we use 30 minutes on Thursday to confirm the two definitions and the revised plan?
Best, Morgan
Concise version
Hi Alex — we found two inconsistent field definitions during integration testing. To avoid migrating incorrect records, we propose moving completion from Aug 14 to Aug 28. We’ll send the mapping by Aug 7 and validate a sample before cutover. Could we confirm the definitions in a 30-minute call Thursday?
五处关键改动
- 用“I’m writing to share an update”替代过度道歉；
- 直接说明日期变化，不把坏消息藏到末尾；
- 把“your data problem”改为跨系统定义不一致，避免甩锅；
- 加入样本迁移和对账，给出可信恢复动作；
- 结尾只有一个明确CTA。
真实润色需要用户提供原邮件与往来语境；本结果只展示处理方式，不代表已改写其真实文本。